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post Apr 1 2016, 06:28 PM
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* Death | Central role to the story, Death creator | JSG
* Alex Browning | Typical Handsome Lead | SPADAM
* Billy Hitchcock | Idiot, Fool, Clumsy | Andr00w
* Carter Horton | Typical Handsome Jock | Tim
* Clear Rivers | Shy Girl, Pretty, Artistic. | Lindsey
* Terry Chaney | Girlfriend of Carter Horton, Bitch | Joe
* Todd Wagner | Shy guy | Mack
* William Bludworth | Morgue Director, Always there, Creepy, Eerie | Cameron
* Eugene Dix | Teacher, very Retro | T boy
* Kat Jennings | Marketing Consultant, Smoker | Oliver
* Kimberly Corman | Student, Worrier | Martyn
* Carrie Dreyer | Student, Girlfriend of Kevin Fischer | Pavel
* Julie Christensen | Student, Shallow, Sister of Wendy Christensen | Scherz
* Wendy Christensen | Senior student, Photographer | Mattias
* Erin Ulmer | goth, Girlfriend to Ian Mckinley | Lotti
* Ian Mckinley | goth, Boyfriend to Erin Ulmer | Harry
* Kevin Fischer | Student, Boyfriend of Carrie Dreyer | Lee
* Carter Daniels | Racist Redneck | Bré
* Cynthia Daniels | Wife of Carter Daniels | Jade
* Lori Milligan | College Student, Girlfriend of Nick O'bannon | Ultraviolence
* Issac Palmer | Presage Paper employee, Womaniser | Iz
* Olivia Castle | Presage Paper employee, rival to Candice Hooper | Garry

Okay hi guys smile.gif To actually make this less confusing that it is going to be, it's currently 4 years after the events of Final Destination 5. Each and everyone of of you was actually saved as much as looked like you died and you now all work at a theme park called 'Spiral Hills'.

The next part will be up shortly but here is the main rule. You guys get to tell the story. So here you can talk like you've known each other for years and pretend that this is indeed real ;')

You all presumably know what your characters are like so it shouldn't be too hard to pretend happy.gif



PRE PREMONITION


The Titanic was sailing again. Well obviously not the real Titanic but the replica that been getting built since the 100th anniversary was finally finished last year and the first sailing in a days time. Clear Rivers was looking forward to this massively. She had Been dying to get away after everything that had happened in the last 16 years. All those needless deaths of all those people that had inexplicably been linked to people surviving disasters they had been involved in. She had been lucky though. She and Alex had survived the plain crash and defeated deaths plan and along the way had a kid called Mike.

Clear actually knew all of these people that had survived all these disasters because the Government had eventually put 2+2 together and for their own protection put them all together to work in the same place and live in the same town. That way if anyone needed protection at least they were all together and thus far it hadn't been necessary for the police to do anything. Death hadn't reared it's Ugly head in 4 years.

So anyway Fast forward a couple of days and everyone from 'Spiral Hills' are on their way to The New Titanic for its maiden voyage. Billy Hitchcock had finally outgrown his idiotic streak, Carter Horton no longer despised Alex Browning.

One person that had not been seen since the last 'Incident' was William Bludworth the Board Director. Alex & Clear learned that William knew a lot more than had been known about death and his plan and they knew that everyone could attribute their surviving to him.

Clear and Alex are the first to board the 'Titanic 2' followed quickly by Carter Daniels and his wife Cynthia Daniels and then quickly again followed by the rest of the Spiral Hills employees. Well except one.

Guys do you really think death is this stupid? All of you 'SURVIVORS' working together at the same place. Living together? How foolish can you be.

Billy Hitchcock decided to head up to The Harbour himself in his brand new blue Cadillac. Well he told everyone it was brand new anyway but actually it was second hand. He knew the guy that sold it to him though and trusted him so it wasn't too bad. Well it hadn't been too bad right up until that last corner. Billy was Speeding because he left late like he usually did and really didn't want to miss the ship leaving. He swerved round the last corner AND THE BRAKES HAD STOPPED WORKING. "What the f*** is going?' on he mouthed at his Reflection in the rearview mirror." Whoa!! What was that??" He exclaimed still looking in the mirror. It got darker. It was shimmering. "No not again you f***ing bast*rd. We beat you. WE BEAT YOU!!"
Billy didn't notice that he'd swerved onto the wrong Lane. He didn't see the Log Lorry coming and when he did, his Brakes didn't work anyway. Billy was dead and none of his co-workers knew.

None of them even knew death is back.
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post Apr 1 2016, 06:31 PM
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QUOTE(JSG @ Apr 1 2016, 07:28 PM) *
* Alex Browning | Typical Handsome Lead | SPADAM

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giving me ZAYN teas tho :')


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post Apr 1 2016, 06:40 PM
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First one dead :')
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post Apr 1 2016, 06:42 PM
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How is Terry tho?
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HARRY WE GOT THIS
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post Apr 1 2016, 07:19 PM
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post Apr 1 2016, 07:20 PM
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Me and Lindsey surviving the plane crash and outsmarting death tho yass yahoo.gif

Tim no longer hating me though mellow.gif kink.gif
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post Apr 1 2016, 07:22 PM
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Then Wendy comes and saves everyone

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QUOTE(Spadzzzzzz~ @ Apr 1 2016, 07:20 PM) *
Me and Lindsey surviving the plane crash and outsmarting death tho yass yahoo.gif

Tim no longer hating me though mellow.gif kink.gif

Waut what?
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post Apr 1 2016, 07:36 PM
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QUOTE(princess_lotti @ Apr 1 2016, 08:16 PM) *
HARRY WE GOT THIS

Yeah we do *.*
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PREMONITION | part one

So they had finally boarded Titanic 2. "Alex come look at this view!!" She exclaimed. They had arrived on the ship about two hours ago and had just finished unpacking their belongings. Now she had her first chance to look out the window and it was facing out onto the sea. It looked so beautiful. "I've already seen it! He stuck his tongue out and went to grab Mike to show him but then remembered that he'd been left with Clears Mum for the week they were away. They'd never been away from Mike for more than a couple of Days so it was unnerving him more than it should. Either that or his strange feelings were to do with what happened last time he and Clear had been together travelling. When the plane exploded. Luckily he'd managed to save some of his class mates from the plane and they'd survived.

Death won't be so easily outsmarted this time.

Carter Horton and Terry had really changed in the 16 years since they had been on the plane. Gone were the days that he picked fights with Alex and Billy. He had matured he liked to think and his wife Terry had changed too. He realised that. She was no longer the spoiled school Girl she once was. Maybe the accident had given her some perspective or maybe it was just getting Married. She was pregnant with their first child but they didn't want to know the Sex.

They had been exploring the ship and ran into Carrie Dreyer. " Have You two Seen Billy anywhere? He's going to miss the Cruise. Seriously. He's nearly lost his job so many times and now he still hasn't learned to leave the house on time." Without even giving Carter a chance to answer she just kept walking. "Well she's getting old." Terry looked at him with that raised eyebrow look she always did when he stated the obvious.


Everyone else was in the messhall getting Lunch before the ship set sail. Only 30 minutes to go. Olivia was looking at her watch trying to show it off to everyone. She'd gotten engaged two years ago but sadly before they'd had time to get married he'd died and this watch was the last thing he'd given her. She'd never worn it until now but she thought it was time to honor him by showing his affectionate present. No one was paying attention though and the buzz of excitement was apparent with everyone.

They were all excited. Of course they would be. The Titanic 2. Such an honour to be sailing on its maiden voyage.

6 Hours later

They'd left port around 5 hours ago. Half an hour late but no one noticed. The captain had warning lights flagging in the bridge of the Titanic 2. Curiously it was for the Watertight doors. The connections hadn't been completed in time for the voyage, well Three of them hadn't but he was confident in the ship. Afterall this was 104 years after the Actual Titanic had sank and technology had made the most amazing advancements since then. Also the ships management company had been pushing for the sailings deadline to be met. There was nothing he could do about the door connections now anyway.

Todd, Kimberly and Julie were walking around the left side of the boat and had just stopped to Lean over the rails and look at where the ship was coming From.

The ship Lurched to the side they were leaning on. Over went Julie & Todd and left was Kimberly holding onto them. You couldn't hear their Screams though for the sound of screeching metal and the other passengers screaming.

The ship lurched again and over went Kimberly. The three of them just falling..

To the next deck. It stuck out father than the top deck. The three of them landed feet first but you could hear the crunch of their bones when they hit the deck. They wouldn't be walking anytime soon. The three of them were in agony but looking around they were still Alive.

"What happened? What was that?" Todd was bewildered and screaming at Julie. She looked at him and screamed just as someone else landed on the deck beside them. It was Carrie Dreyer. She was Dead. Eyes still open, impaled through the chest by what looked like a massive Piece of blue metal. Todd tried to get up but to no avail and screamed in agony as his legs were Broken. He could see the bones sticking through the rips in his trousers.

It didn't matter though. He looked up after the whining and groaning of metal pierced the sky. He looked up just as did Julie and Kimberly. They saw it start to fall, heard the support cables whip past them and hit the water. He saw one of the support cables whip someone off the ship, slitting them in half as it did and saw the blood spray into the ocean. It was Eugene! Why is this happening? He couldn't belive it. After all this time it was happening now! He saw the funnel start to keel over towards them. He never saw anything after that. Neither did Julie or Kimberly. The funnel slammed into the top of the ship right above them and tore right through the deck and the hull. They didn't feel it though. It was quick.

Just the way death likes it...

Part two of the premonition will be coming up.
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post Apr 1 2016, 07:59 PM
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Broken legs and crushed by a funnel. Booooo.
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post Apr 1 2016, 09:27 PM
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PREMONITION | PART TWO


No one else knew that any of the others were dead. They just knew they were in trouble when the ship Lurched to the Side. Ian Mckinley and his longterm Girlfriend Erin Ulmer were thrown against one of the deck walls. The Ship righted itself but not before the first funnel came crashing down on the other side of the ship. Olivia came running around the corner just as someone came running through the messhall door and pushed her into the railing on the deck. It was Issac Palmer. Probably trying to cop a feel! Olivia punched him and not two seconds later one of the suspended lifeboats came flying down from its catch and flew into her back. Issac watched and saw everything. He saw the lifeboat go straight through her like she was made of sand and leave a bloody mess on the floor. He stepped back and tripped over someone else, falling over the railing and landing head first in to the water. He never made it back up though. He landed in a massive swarm of Jelly fish which he just happened to be allergic to. Several stings later and he was Gone. Oops.

Issac had tripped over Erin Ulmer who had fallen to the ground. She was looking around for Ian but could not see him. The ship Lurched to the side and this time it didn't immediately right itself. She slid down to the wall again and there was Ian. His legs had been sliced by one of the funnel cables. He'd been trying to move but couldn't get very far with the ship constantly moving. It didn't matter though. He'd be dead soon enough.

NEW SCENE

Paris Airways plane number 081, Flight 925 travelling from Paris, France to New York, New York had been flying for 7 hours and 30 minutes and we're just preparing for decent when the plane's radar failed. Flying straight into a storm the plane was struck by lightning and lost all power. The plane is now heading straight into the Atlantic Ocean where Titanic 2 is currently floundering.

BACK ON THE TITANIC

The ship righted itself once more and Erin got up and ran straight over to Ian cradeling him in her arms. She could see everyone panicking and running Around. She couldn't however see any of the staff trying to lower the life boats which seemed the strangest thing in the world right Now. This was it. She knew they were going to die.
Carter and Cynthia were running down from the front of the boat, Cynthia stopping when she saw Erin and Carter stopping to try and help Ian. Lori, Kevin & Wendy then came running from the south of the ship also stopping where the rest of them stood.

Wendy started to panic. A meeting like this could only mean one thing if they were to believe death was back but surely death couldn't be here. He didn't really wait all this time to get them back together did He?

Terry & Kat came through from the Messhall obviously looking for anyone else from the group of them that had boarded the ship. Another two added to their group congregating in the middle of the ship. Wendy knew it was happening. Death was here. He was here to correct his original plan and this was how he was going to do it. What a prick.

"Guys" said Wendy "we need to go. Head to the back of the ship. It's sinking from the front and we won't last long if we stay-" That was the end of her sentence. With the loudest sound anyone on the ship had ever heard, an explosion ripped through the center of the ship and split it right down the center just like the original Titanic. 'HOW IRONIC' She thought just as she fell through the deck of the ship. Everyone in the middle of the ship had perished in the explosion apart from Ian but he didn't care. He just watched everyone die.

The ship had completely separated down the middle with both sides separated by the sea. What was that noise, like the noise a God would make if he was getting ready to smyte everyone. Even Louder than the explosion that ripped through the ship and tore it apart. Ian looked up and screamed. There it was. METAL falling from the sky. He knew his time was over. How ironic he would be killed by a plane rather than the boat he was on when the first of deaths design survivors nearly died in a plane crash. And that was it. He was gone. The whole south half the ship was gone.

Only two survivors remained but they wouldn't last long either. Alex and Clear were Unaware that they were the last who survivors of the Spiral Hills employees until the explosion that tore the ship apart. Alex and Clear had started running toward the back of the ship after everyone had started meeting In the Middle. They both knew this had been deaths design all along once the ship had started lurching and people had started dying and then when everyone met in the middle they decided staying as far away from the group was the best they could do if they were ever to survive the ship going down. Just as they got to the back railing, the ship ripped apart with the loudest explosive noise either of them had heard.

Turning around they could see the fire and Smoke. It was clear the ship had been tore apart down the middle. Just like the original Titanic ship. Except this was the fault of death, not a huge lump of ice in the middle of the sea. And then it happened. The most absurdly stupid thing they'd ever Seen.

A plane fell out the sky. A plane. Falling from the sky. It had clearly Broken up from the height it had fallen for whatever reason it had been falling, neither of them could be sure but he did see something. The tail number of the plane was 081. 081-180 reversed. What Are the chances. He couldn't have helped anyone anyway. All the pieces of the plane plowed straight into the south end of the ship. An almighty explosion later and the majority of that part of the ship was on fire and sinking Fast.

It was at this point that Alex realised that the back of the part of the ship they were on had started rising out the water just like in the film he'd watched. He decided to do what they done in the movie, told Clear the plan and they both jumped on the opposite side of the railing.

The back of the ship was up 180 degrees out the water. Alex and Clear the last two people on the ship, everyone else gone or dead. This was It. Death had been working up to this all Along. Neither of them heard or saw the last bit of plane #081 coming from the sky straight for where they were. A wheel. A plane wheel. What Are the chances? It hit the ship with such force that flung clear and Alex straight away from it. Alex looked down toward the sea as he flew away. CLEARS HEAD. He aw Clears head flying through the air below him, her body nowhere to be seen. She was gone. He landed in the water with such force it felt like very bone in his body was broken... And he was sinking. Just like the Ship. He was...

He was sitting in the car with Clear dropping off Mike to his Mums.

Okay guys that's the premonition done. Feel free to talk in here as employees of Spiral Hills if you signed up to take part and death will be back Shortly.

Just remember that you all have still got to head to Titanic 2 though.



And just incase Alex doesn't know, he and Clear should be trying to save everyone from getting on The ship although that doesn't necessarily mean he had to SAVE EVERYONE wink.gif
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post Apr 1 2016, 09:43 PM
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How do you guys want do this. Either ~

• You Cn all take an active roll and tell the story including Adam who is Alex saving everyone before they board the Titanic 2 (I personally think this would be best cause it would be easy enough for you all to tell a story and make it complete and just let me jump in to destroy you all in random money's)

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• Would you rather I continue this in story form myself and just kill you all off?
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post Apr 1 2016, 09:46 PM
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I don't really have that much time to commit to another thing really JSG, what with the duo thing, personal commitments and returning to the external sites, (and I haven't really been the type to tell good stories for years, the SpunGerGames teas kink.gif )
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Do we all have to contribute to the story, if option number one?
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I dont mind either way tbh
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post Apr 1 2016, 09:58 PM
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Yes Mattias although like SPADAM says he hasn't got time so whoever has picked clear Rivers might have to pick up the slack for him. You only have to write the story relative to your chaacter and try to make each others stories for with each other so it all flows happy.gif
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QUOTE(JSG @ Apr 1 2016, 10:58 PM) *
Yes Mattias although like SPADAM says he hasn't got time so whoever has picked clear Rivers might have to pick up the slack for him. You only have to write the story relative to your chaacter and try to make each others stories for with each other so it all flows happy.gif

That would be Lindsey, but she's already very busy with the duo contest, so maybe if I had an idea of how much I need to write I could cook up something later tonight at 4:43 when I should be sleeping
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QUOTE(Spadzzzzzz~ @ Apr 1 2016, 11:05 PM) *
That would be Lindsey, but she's already very busy with the duo contest, so maybe if I had an idea of how much I need to write I could cook up something later tonight at 4:43 when I should be sleeping


Well you would technically be first to write something because you are going to save those people from me but that doesn't mean that no one else can wait to write because everything should be relative to each other and connected anyway. It should be easy enough for everyone to make their character to fit around one another.
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