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Am I losing her, is it just a case of love and learn

She says don't worry and that it's ok

But I'm not sure when I watch her face

She's beat inside and I'm running out of things to say

 

I'm hanging my faith on the line

And I'm scared I won't find an answer

But I don't want to live my life

Wondering if I could have reached her

 

Don't turn away from me

I can tell by the way you breathe

There's a tear in your voice and you can't speak

I need to hear the truth

Do you love me or are we through

Is there something that I can do to save us

To save love

 

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'No More' is going through my head....can't stop it

 

..wish it didn't stop mid flow...wonder if there is more of it

Been listening to Gareth, but I'm now listening to Laughter In The Rain and I've got the accompanying visual effect right outside this window.
So does no more. I doubt he'll put full versons out. I love the chorus of 'Laughing in the Rain' but not to keen on the verses.
Am I losing her, is it just a case of love and learn

She says don't worry and that it's ok

But I'm not sure when I watch her face

She's beat inside and I'm running out of things to say

 

I'm hanging my faith on the line

And I'm scared I won't find an answer

But I don't want to live my life

Wondering if I could have reached her

 

Don't turn away from me

I can tell by the way you breathe

There's a tear in your voice and you can't speak

I need to hear the truth

Do you love me or are we through

Is there something that I can do to save us

To save love

 

This one. Can't quite tear myself away for my lunch club somehow.

 

I couldn't have known the love I let go

would haunt me and leave me standing so cold

I'm not gonna lie

But I'm empty inside 'cos I can't live with thinking.......What, what, what.......argh....thinking what

 

...someone please put me out of my missssery

Edited by SpamFritter

I keep having to log onto here again

 

Sonnet's site if fine for me.

 

No more days, no more fights

No more hard and sleepless nights

No more you, no more us

No more blind forgiving trust

 

I couldn't have known the love I let go

Would haunt me and leave me standing alone

I'm not gonna lie when I'm empty inside

Cos I can't live with...

 

No more love, no more fate

No more putting up with things you hate

No more truth, no pretence

No beginning at the end

 

If you could forget the things I said then laid me down

And if I could forgive the things you did

Then I could love again

 

I couldn't have known the love I let go

would haunt me and leave me standing so cold

I'm not gonna lie when I'm empty inside

Cos I can't live with thinking...

 

I never ever gave you enough

Cos you never saw the things I gave up

You said that you needed more

But I gave you my all

I gave you trust but you stole my faith

I gave you love, threw it in my face

So I gave you up and I'm making up my mind

I don't need you no more

 

No more days, no more fights

No more hard and sleepless nights

No more you, no more us

No more blind forgiving trust

Can't take it no more

"I never ever gave you enough

Cos you never saw the things I gave up

You said that you needed more

But I gave you my all

I gave you trust but you stole my faith

I gave you love, threw it in my face

So I gave you up and I'm making up my mind

I don't need you no more"

 

 

I'm not musically gifted but poetically the rhythm of this section seems different to me. I've tried to fit it to the melody but it seems more like a "Find your voice and free it" type interjection. If it is, I'm particularly sad Darius chose to cut No More off just at that point.

 

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