i've thought of an idea and i didn't know where to post it so i posted it here

 

here's a couple of song's i've writen

 

Hostage For Love

 

you've locked me in a cage

and you've thrown away the key

ratttle the bars every day

toying with me

your love is like a wall

i have to break through

dreaming of the day

I can escape you

 

Chorus:

can't you see

that i am a hostage for love

let me free

coz i am a hostage for love

you torment me

from under your disguise

waiting for the

day of my demise

don't you know

that i'm

a hostage for love

 

you're keeping me

trapped in this cage

stuck waiting

for hell to have an ice age

in such a complication

out of communication

no chance for a declaration

I need a salvation

 

Chorus x2

 

Outta My Head

 

When I look In the mirror

there's something staring back at me

who i don't remember

he's starring at me knowingly

what have i become

i'mturning into something i'm not

this person inside me

one body andon emind we've got

 

Chorus;

 

There's blood on my hands but i don't know

how it got there, is somebody dead

i don't want him here

i want him outta my heaf

head head head head head ay ya ya

I want it outta my

head

 

becoming someone who's the

opposite of what i stand for

I'm so sick of it

I don't want it in my head no more

i'minside another body

that's doing what i don't wan tit to do

if this carries on anymore

i think i'm gonna have to sue

 

Chorus;

 

There's blood on my hands but i don't know

how it got there, is somebody dead

i don't want him here

i want him outta my heaf

head head head head head ay ya ya

I want it outta my

head

 

Yeah I want you yeah yeah i want you

outta outta outta outta outta outta

My Head

 

Little Piece Of ground

 

Oh what a wonderfull date

no we can't hav e one tomorrow

don't pretend that when i'm not with you

you just drown in your sorrow

don't ring me up today

like you've got nothing better to do

if you just leave me alone

then i may have a chance to miss you

 

Chorus:

All i ask for

is a little piece of ground

and some time

when you're not around

when i won't

have to hear your sound

if you are the ocean

then i'm nearly drowned

i'm only asking for

a little piece of ground

 

no you cannot come round

to my house today - oh Wait!

now all of a sudden your heart is broken

and the sky's all gone grey

you're not gonna get

the same as yesterday

because it's not natural

in any single way

 

Chorus x2

 

 

 

so i dunno what you guy'll think so comment away

are they that bad?

i take it they are

I think that all the songs have their good points, I don't particularly like the chorus in Outta my Head as it just seems rhyming for the sake of rhyming. I like the third song, but not the name, the lyrics are good although it seems a bit too blatant

 

:)