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I can't see myself doing one anytime soon tbh. :lol: Not that much into poetry writing myself!
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Fine...be that way...see what I care....I'll just keep what else I have written, plus a couple other ideas to myself.... :P :P :P

 

It takes me longer these days, I'm braindead.

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I'm older....been brain dead longer..... :rolleyes:

 

Okay, David....I'll post this one more, then wait for you to try one....I'm not pretending to be a poet of any kind myself, but, I can make things rhyme...I'm sure you can, too.... :)

 

This one I call Psycho's Secret, to the tune Flora's Secret....

 

Wacko in the long grass

seeking Enya

security sees them

only to discover

in the dust and shadows

written 'Enya I want you'

 

Fruitcake is crazy

sweat is flowing

all around them sirens blowing

police getting closer

on their bull horns

calling out to psycho

words psycho never knew

 

Silver net poles

tears from nutso

for they are caught

sent to a far away island

strait jackets, shackles

around ankles

hospital's fluorescent hue

 

Psycho is sedated

wishing freedom

but they can't have it

they wail about it

being captive

unable to chase their desire

many years will pass

with much therapy too

 

Psycho in the long grass

close beside them

two nurses with a chain

mumbling the name of their desire

there will be no day

for them to remember

any time so soon

longing for their freedom

to resume stalking Enya

and when they see her

they would begin to swoon

Psycho in the long grass

in a downpour

Enya they're mad at you

for you avoid them

since they're crazy

and none can blame you

psycho makes a big break

security's doubled

as they try to see you

but Nicky won't let them

even speak to you

since you know they'll harm you

but you barely hear them

scream out 'Enya I live for you'

This sounds like something I should do after a few vodkas. :w00t:
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This sounds like something I should do after a few vodkas. :w00t:

 

 

But it's just as much fun stone sober.... :rolleyes:

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I guess no-one thinks they're talented enough, other than me, to mangle Enya lyrics??? Guess I won't be posting anymore in this thread, then....even what I have done, and what I'm working on....as I have another one ready, and am working on another...

 

 

Guess this thread can be closed, since it's an apparent waste of forum space....

I guess no-one thinks they're talented enough, other than me, to mangle Enya lyrics??? Guess I won't be posting anymore in this thread, then....even what I have done, and what I'm working on....as I have another one ready, and am working on another...

Guess this thread can be closed, since it's an apparent waste of forum space....

 

It's not a waste of space, you shouldn't be so negative about it! I just haven't had a chance to try my hand..patience.. ;)

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I have this altered couplet from Evacuee going thru my thoughts now and then, it's really annoying actually, as the true lyrics are lovely.

 

If only you were here with me

We'd sit at home and watch TV....

 

LOL I just imagine Enya singing that.

 

:lol:

Oh dear, here comes another...

 

Actually this one started in Unity Chat, with one Chuckmissus...

 

...n kinda grew from there...

 

Apologies to Marble Halls.

 

 

I dreamt I knelt on marble floors

 

With bucket and mop by my side.

 

And after I'd given it a real good wash

 

I found that it made a great slide.

 

 

Enya/Roma I'm sooooooo sorry!

 

:unsure:

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Afer, your stuff is a SCREAM!!!!!! :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

*groans* - Oh Big, what have you started? :puke2:

 

*confesses* - I've had a bit more for the Evacuee lyric.... :cry:

 

*spits it out*

 

If only you were here with me

We'd sit at home and watch TV.

We'd watch your sport

And not turn over....

 

*sigh of relief * - Please don't hate me, Enya and Roma.... :(

Edited by Afer

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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

 

 

Afer....you're a lyrical genius!!!!!

 

I love your stuff!!!!

 

You know me, I'm of the habit of creating'monsters'.....in a good way, of course..... :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

 

It's okay, Afer, just let it all out..... :cheer: :cheer:

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This one I call Psycho's Secret, to the tune Flora's Secret....

 

Wacko in the long grass

seeking Enya

security sees them

only to discover

in the dust and shadows

written 'Enya I want you'

 

Fruitcake is crazy

sweat is flowing

all around them sirens blowing

police getting closer

on their bull horns

calling out to psycho

words psycho never knew

 

Silver net poles

tears from nutso

for they are caught

sent to a far away island

strait jackets, shackles

around ankles

hospital's fluorescent hue

 

Psycho is sedated

wishing freedom

but they can't have it

they wail about it

being captive

unable to chase their desire

many years will pass

with much therapy too

 

Psycho in the long grass

close beside them

two nurses with a chain

mumbling the name of their desire

there will be no day

for them to remember

any time so soon

longing for their freedom

to resume stalking Enya

and when they see her

they would begin to swoon

Psycho in the long grass

in a downpour

Enya they're mad at you

for you avoid them

since they're crazy

and none can blame you

psycho makes a big break

security's doubled

as they try to see you

but Nicky won't let them

even speak to you

since you know they'll harm you

but you barely hear them

scream out 'Enya I live for you'

 

 

I just read this... so funny, and yet so sad... :unsure:

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Not yet.....haven't sat down for a while to see what I could come up with.....any suggestions?

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