Striking Smith

Hey guys It's very much a demo - it needs more electric guitar, but my guitar neck is cracked. Your comments on the structure, instrument arrangement, and the song itself would be very helpful. It's track 4 on my player at http://people.aapt.net.au/celebritymusic/s...ikingsmith.html - it's a streaming player, so no need to wait for a download. Cheers Tommy T