Posted June 20, 200718 yr JUST BE Life is crazy Love is blind Seasons change And flowers die Summer comes As spring's forgotten From He who knows ,we're all begotten A crossroad under ominous clouds I annoint the page and sing out loud Long to share what I possess Burdens heavy on my chest I long for more, and feel the power It grows within me every hour Beauty's all around us, see? And we are whom we chose to be Love&Music-my everyday I jot down what my lips cant say I wish that I could give advice To me, 3 years ago in life But everything we live and say Makes us who we are today My morals are intact as I Watch the others pass me by I wonder where they want to go But something tells me they dont know Thirsting for newness I drink in the words Thankful for what's already occured I know that there is much for me This world is ours, so baby, Just BE. -Joanna Hey guys, Ive been writing alot, as much has been happening in life! I know that it will be a while, but I just want you to hang in their with me until the next album comes out. It will be worth the wait, I can feel it. I hope everyone is having a brilliant summer and having alot of fun, where ever in the world you are! love love love Love&music... -J LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTT especially the lyrics "i jot down what my lips cant say". the poem is from her Myspace
June 20, 200718 yr What a c**p poem, she can't spell A LOT either, I dunno what that says for her writing ability tbh =/ I wish she'd get on and release some new material rather than wasting her time on poems :-/ :(
June 20, 200718 yr Author What a c**p poem, she can't spell A LOT either, I dunno what that says for her writing ability tbh =/ I wish she'd get on and release some new material rather than wasting her time on poems :-/ :( its the american way :P its an amazing poem :) love it :) hopefully she gets a bigger hand in the writing terms on the new album. glad shes started work on it. that means we wont have to wait long time after she has turned 18 :)
June 24, 200718 yr What exactly does this thread have to do with POP MUSIC, surely it belongs in the Culture Box? :wacko:
June 24, 200718 yr Author What exactly does this thread have to do with POP MUSIC, surely it belongs in the Culture Box? :wacko: didnt really know where to put it. randomly chose to put it in the pop section. forgive :(
June 24, 200718 yr What exactly does this thread have to do with POP MUSIC, surely it belongs in the Culture Box? :wacko: Well no, this has nothing to do with culture anyway. The poem belongs in the incinerator. "Life is crazy Love is blind Seasons change And flowers die" I could find more original and challenging lines in a nursery rhyme.
June 24, 200718 yr Author the ignorance of some people to be able to open up their mind that TINY bit
June 24, 200718 yr the ignorance of some people to be able to open up their mind that TINY bit If you really believe that this is amongst the highest quality of poetry out there, then I suggest it's not us who needs to open up their minds.
June 24, 200718 yr "Thirsting for newness I drink in the words" I'm sorry but that line is AWFUL. 2 of the words don't even exist :/ If you really believe that this is amongst the highest quality of poetry out there, then I suggest it's not us who needs to open up their minds. Yep. I suggest you read some Blake, Hardy or some Dickinson poetry to see what truly good poetry is :D
June 24, 200718 yr Neither the word "thirsting" nor "newness" are words in the English language. If ever we could see why JoJo doesn't write her own music this poem shows it; she lacks any intelligent ability to write well.
June 24, 200718 yr Author um: 1) she is borderline genius 2) she has written songs on both of her album
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